My improvement on argumentative essay is to put the thesis statement and more evidence. I didn't put this on my essay because I was thinking much things about the facts on the topic rather then the evidence. That's why I need to improve more on my argumentative essay.
Debate... Debate is almost similar to Argumentative essay, the difference is that the argumentative essay is like a reflection, it's what we have to ourselves. But, debate is when we have two teams that team #1 agrees with "Smoking Shall Be Banned!" and team #2 is the opposite. it is when for example 3 members from each teams could complain about why it is good or bad to smoke. The last speaker should sum up all of the arguments, that person needs to come up with a better solution.
From the previous debate I've experienced, I realized I was speaking too fast, but I was clear. And at the end I realized people wasn't really sure about the statement that I wrote. So what I need to improve on debate is speak slower and clearer.
From the previous debate I've experienced, I realized I was speaking too fast, but I was clear. And at the end I realized people wasn't really sure about the statement that I wrote. So what I need to improve on debate is speak slower and clearer.
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